Your feedback on Karin's paper addresses all aspects of the assignment. But at the end you mention that Karin has to check for spelling errors and proofread. Proofread for what? Did you notice particular issues in the paper? What were they and how can Karin correct these?
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ReplyDeleteNice Work Natalia! Please Check your Proposal and Thesis post to see my comments. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteYour feedback on Karin's paper addresses all aspects of the assignment. But at the end you mention that Karin has to check for spelling errors and proofread. Proofread for what? Did you notice particular issues in the paper? What were they and how can Karin correct these?
ReplyDeleteshe misspeld a lot of words and some sentences weren't clear. She would of noticed if she had reread it.
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