Hey Natalia I just read your research proposal. It's really good, you provided many information. what you need to do is read it again to fix some grammatical mistakes. Moreover, you need to go details for some of the information you provided. Don't worry I will make sure you know where I want you to go into details. Last but not least, I will give you some source based on your thesis. Hope they works for you! Keep in touch!
Hey Natalia, for some reason I can view your research proposal but can't edit it. Can you please fix your privacy for me so I can edit it? and give you some suggestion? and I will send you the links for sources here. okay?
1) http://ehis.ebscohost.com.rpa.laguardia.edu:2048/ehost/detail?vid=3&hid=2&sid=aceb55af-7d40-4c42-8912-0f99cbbc84ed%40sessionmgr4&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#db=a9h&AN=34481309 (Source: Men & Masculinities)
2) http://ehis.ebscohost.com.rpa.laguardia.edu:2048/ehost/detail?vid=3&hid=2&sid=aceb55af-7d40-4c42-8912-0f99cbbc84ed%40sessionmgr4&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#db=fd43b2a1&AN= (Source: Men & Society)
3) http://ehis.ebscohost.com.rpa.laguardia.edu:2048/ehost/detail?vid=3&hid=2&sid=aceb55af-7d40-4c42-8912-0f99cbbc84ed%40sessionmgr4&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#db=a9h&AN=27158080 (Source: Conference Papers -- International Studies Association)
Hi again! here are some source that you can use for your research paper. they are good and usable. In order to view them just follow the instruction to log in to LaGuardia Esbcohost.
Also, In order to find good sources don't look into Google. Instead, use our college library website, Ebsco Host, LexisNexis, and website that ends with gov, org are usually relay able.
And you can use "Hegemonic Masculinity" as your key words. I hope it helps, If you have any question just feel free to ask me.
Check your yahoo mailbox for an e-mail with attachment containing your proposal with my comments. Please let me know if you cannot view it.
ReplyDeleteI was able to view your comments.
ReplyDeleteHey Natalia I just read your research proposal. It's really good, you provided many information. what you need to do is read it again to fix some grammatical mistakes. Moreover, you need to go details for some of the information you provided. Don't worry I will make sure you know where I want you to go into details. Last but not least, I will give you some source based on your thesis. Hope they works for you! Keep in touch!
ReplyDeleteGood Luck!
ReplyDeleteHey Natalia, for some reason I can view your research proposal but can't edit it. Can you please fix your privacy for me so I can edit it? and give you some suggestion? and I will send you the links for sources here. okay?
ReplyDelete1) http://ehis.ebscohost.com.rpa.laguardia.edu:2048/ehost/detail?vid=3&hid=2&sid=aceb55af-7d40-4c42-8912-0f99cbbc84ed%40sessionmgr4&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#db=a9h&AN=34481309 (Source: Men & Masculinities)
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http://ehis.ebscohost.com.rpa.laguardia.edu:2048/ehost/detail?vid=3&hid=2&sid=aceb55af-7d40-4c42-8912-0f99cbbc84ed%40sessionmgr4&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#db=fd43b2a1&AN= (Source: Men & Society)
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http://ehis.ebscohost.com.rpa.laguardia.edu:2048/ehost/detail?vid=3&hid=2&sid=aceb55af-7d40-4c42-8912-0f99cbbc84ed%40sessionmgr4&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#db=a9h&AN=27158080 (Source: Conference Papers -- International Studies Association)
Hi again! here are some source that you can use for your research paper. they are good and usable. In order to view them just follow the instruction to log in to LaGuardia Esbcohost.
Also, In order to find good sources don't look into Google. Instead, use our college library website, Ebsco Host, LexisNexis, and website that ends with gov, org are usually relay able.
ReplyDeleteAnd you can use "Hegemonic Masculinity" as your key words. I hope it helps, If you have any question just feel free to ask me.
ok thank you sos much for your help and feedback :)
ReplyDeleteI fixed it so you should be able to edit now.
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